YOU ARE GETTING MARRIED . WRITE A LETTER TO AN ENGLISH SPEAKING FRIEND TO INVITE HIM/HER TO THE WEDDING. IN YOUR LETTER
- DESCRIBE WHO YOU ARE GOING TO MARRY.
- TELL WHAT WILL HAPPEN ON THE WEDDING DAY (SCHEDULE)
- EXPLAIN WHY IT IS IMPORTANT FOR HIM/HER TO BE AT THE WEDDING
DEAREST VIRONICA,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INVITE YOU TO MY WEDDING WHICH IS GOING TO HELD ON 25 TH OF DECEMBER. I AM GOING TO MARRY WITH MY BEST FRIEND RAHUL WHICH I WAS USED TO TALK WITH YOU.
HOWEVER, IT IS A DESTINATION WEDDING IN RAJASTHAN.RAJASTHAN IS A ROYAL CITY OF PALACES AND YOU WILL DEFINETLY GONNA ENJOY MY MARRIAGE IN SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DESTINATION.MOREOVER , MARRIAGE FUNCTIONS GOING TO CONTINUE FOR THREE DAYS 23-25 OF DECEMBER.ON 23RD THERE WILL BE HALDI CERAMONY , LADIES SANGEET AND PRE WEDDING SHOOT WILL BE ON 24TH AND MARRIAGE WILL BE ON 25TH. BELIEVE ME YOU WILL GET THE CHANCE TO SEE THE INDIAN MARRIAGE CULTURE AND TRADITIONS.
YOU HAVE TO REACH ON CHANDIGARH AIRPOT ON 24TH OF JAN AND THERE I WILL SEND SOMEONE TO PICK YOU UP. AFTERALL YOU ARE MY ONLY FRIEND FROM CANADA SO I REALLY WANT YOU TO COME AND ATTEND MY SPECIAL DAY.
I HOPE YOU WILL ABLE TO MAKE IT.
YOUR LOVING
ANCHAL SAINI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'hold'
Suggestion: Hold
...ITE YOU TO MY WEDDING WHICH IS GOING TO HELD ON 25 TH OF DECEMBER. I AM GOING TO MAR...
^^^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'USED TO talking'.
Suggestion: USED TO talking
...Y WITH MY BEST FRIEND RAHUL WHICH I WAS USED TO TALK WITH YOU. HOWEVER, IT IS A DESTINATION...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...IN SUCH A BEAUTIFUL DESTINATION.MOREOVER , MARRIAGE FUNCTIONS GOING TO CONTINUE FO...
^^
Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...BER.ON 23RD THERE WILL BE HALDI CERAMONY , LADIES SANGEET AND PRE WEDDING SHOOT WI...
^^
Line 4, column 100, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...ERE I WILL SEND SOMEONE TO PICK YOU UP. AFTERALL YOU ARE MY ONLY FRIEND FROM CANADA SO I...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
...DAY. I HOPE YOU WILL ABLE TO MAKE IT. YOUR LOVING ANCHAL SAINI
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4674556213 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81319981965 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621301775148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.997524722 44.8134815571 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 94.375 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289307934296 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118723861337 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448562168585 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16086359149 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424408200356 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.