Write a letter to the local council about the closure of a playground in your area because children don’t use it much. In your letter say
– Why don’t many children use it?
– How is the playground important for children?
– Give some suggestions how to increase the playground’s usage.
Dear Sir,
My name is James, a resident of South Avenue Brampton. Recently, I came to know from a local newspaper that local council had decided to close down the 15 years old playground of our area.However, I think council should deep dive to find actual reasons why this drop is happening.
Let me explain you the key reasons, Firstly, this playground is not maintained properly. The swings are broken and no arrangements for drinking water for children. Secondly, grass and flowers are not watered or cut on regular intervals so it gives a bad look to the playground. Last but not the least, the fencing of the playground is also broken at few points which allow the animals like dogs, cows to enter playground. Due to these animals children do not feel safe playing there.
As this is the oldest playground, so it is very important to preserve it as an identity to our area.I think playground plays a vital role to promote outdoor activities among young children.As a matter of fact, playing outdoor games not only improve the health of children but also help to promote social harmony among children, which is very important.
The corrective actions should be taken on war footing level to regain the glory of this playground. I would like to suggest that council should allocate a special budget for this playground. New swings should be installed, fencing should be repaired and new flowers should be planted. Local residents are always ready to support you with time and money, because by investing in this playground we are investing in healthy future of our children.
Hope you will take the suggestions in your immediate consideration.
Thanks
Yours Sincerely,
James
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...en also do not feel safe playing there. As this is the one of the oldest playgro...
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...promote outdoor games in young children.As a matter of fact playing outdoor games ...
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...ons in your immediate consideration. thanks Yours Sincerely, James
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...on. thanks Yours Sincerely, James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, i think, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 937.175257732 173% => OK
No of words: 333.0 206.0 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86186186186 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62275481255 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 127.690721649 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576576576577 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 290.88556701 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0798337731 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253751067882 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789383684262 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462764799414 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129145406821 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330155555846 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.