Write a letter to the local council about the poor condition of roads in your area. Include the following in your letter:
– Explain the situation and roads’ condition.
– How does it affect you and other people?
– Suggest what measures need to be taken, in your opinion.
Dear Sir,
I am James, resident of South End Avenue, Brampton. On behalf of residents of my area, I am writing this letter to raise my concern about the condition of roads of my area. Although, the main roads of our are good but the inner roads within the Blocks of South Avenue are in pathetic situation. There are lots of pits and pots in the roads and there are no proper signage's installed at sides of the road. There is no marking done about speed lanes and zebra crossings at junctions.
The situation is getting more and more bad day by day. It is very difficult for daily commutators due to poor roads. Poor condition of roads leads to road accidents and traffic jams. Not only this noise and air pollution increases in our area because of the congestion of vehicles. It becomes very difficult for students and elderly people to use these roads. Sharing my personal experience, last month due to rainy season the condition of roads got really pathetic and my motorcycle got slipped and I got hurt.
I would suggest you that please assign some representatives to visit our area and make an inspection report about condition of roads. Kindly allocate some additional funds because there roads needs immediate repair and maintenance so that people of our area can commute smoothly.
Hope you will take this matter on the top of your priority and take necessary steps correct this situation.
Thanking you in advance.
Your faithfully,
James
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 251.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83266932271 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52054934435 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589641434263 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.575413154 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8125 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277545151533 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785498748541 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562851319073 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124055864968 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437915613339 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.