You have received a record that needs to be translated. Write a letter to a translating agency and say
– What is there on the record?
– Why do you want to translate it?
– Why is it so urgent for you to get it translated?
Dear Sir,
I am James, working in as production supervisor in Hot Star Industries. I am writing this letter to request you to do translation for 10 pages of an operating manual of a new automatic machine imported for Germany by our company.
The manual which was provided with this machine was printed in German and I am unable to read and understand the details regarding operations and usage of this new automatic machine. No one in your company knows German and so we are unable to install and use this machine.
This machine is an upgraded model and different form the machine which is now used by our company. The existing machine was not working fine so it was removed from production line 2 days ago.Form last 2 days the production of goods had been stopped. So it is very urgent to get the new machine installed and make the production line operational.
I am confident that you can give me fast and correct solution on this problem.The photocopies of the manual enclosed with this letter for your reference, kindly do the translations of all the 10 pages. Waiting for your prompt reply in anticipation. If you have any further queries regarding this matter please feel free to call me at 982058750.
Your faithfully,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Form
...removed from production line 2 days ago.Form last 2 days the production of goods had...
^^^^
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...st and correct solution on this problem.The photocopies of the manual enclosed with...
^^^
Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for your prompt reply in anticipation. If you have any further queries regarding ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15311004785 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47767574854 2.54303337028 137% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4901234511 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140213008861 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531363304725 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671391988647 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972442067553 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742940283205 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.