You have received a record that needs to be translated. Write a letter to a translating agency and say– What is there on the record?– Why do you want to translate it?– Why is it so urgent for you to get it translated?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to avail an English translation of a Spanish record.

Description of the symptoms of a disease is very important to diagnose any disease and possible treatments. I work in a multinational company that has offices across the globe. Recently, in an internal newsletter I published an article about possible cure for Epilepsy in Ayurveda. This newsletter is localized in all languages for a company wide circulation. A colleague of mine, from Spain has a child who has been suffering from Epilepsy for the past few years and is interested in exploring more about a possible treatment in Ayurveda.

However, the only language he speaks and understands is Spanish and I am not familiar with Spanish. He has recorded all the questions and emailed me the audio file. This linguistic barrier, has been an impediment in responding to his quires. Considering that he is seeking for urgent medical help that alleviate his son's condition, it is important that I understand his question. It would be grateful if you could translate the contents of this file at the earliest so that I can respond to his inquires.

Looking forward to a prompt response from your agency at the earliest.

Yours faithfully,
Rajie

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, in an internal newsletter I published an article about possible cure for Epile...
^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he earliest. Yours faithfully, Rajie
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03381642512 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9648535941 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2115334923 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1538461538 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137699585989 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420006050938 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609041887102 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938393398857 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729839713225 0.0580467560999 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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