Dear Sara,
It has been a while since we have been in touch. Life has been quite hectic after I moved to Bangalore. I am delighted to invite you to my new home.
Last month after my appraisal I was promoted as a regional sales manager. However, the position was based out of Bangalore and I had to make a tough decision of moving out of my home town. Although, I was excited about exploring a new place all by myself and meeting new people, I was a little nervous too.
My new home is a beautiful three bedroom house located in the fifth floor of 'Embassy Pristine". It overlooks a beautiful lake and a garden. A serene, peaceful, spacious, and a secure place always makes you feel at home. There is an in-house state of art gym, a club house, and a restaurant by the pool that serves some amazing continental food.
It would be wonderful if you could come over this weekend to my home. What best way to relish a refreshing cup of tea in the balcony with your best friend on a rainy day. Cannot wait to catch up on the gossips.
Love,
Rajie
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'house' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'houses'.
Suggestion: houses
...y new home is a beautiful three bedroom house located in the fifth floor of Embassy P...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tch up on the gossips. Love, Rajie
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37373737374 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48569009317 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5394579938 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6153846154 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178321060519 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487551011236 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400644908366 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990931025504 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036851467797 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.