Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays everyone wants to stay fit and healthy, therefore the role of sports increases day by day. Some people take part in sports causally just for entertainment where are some people take parts in sports very actively. In this essay lets us discuss the reasons for both the approaches one by one. In my opinion the reasons may vary from person to person but there is no doubt that sports help to keeps an individual healthy, so taking part in sports have become the need of hour.
Firstly, let us discuss why people consider sports as a source of entertainment. The main argument for this kind of approach is that people often enjoy more playing causally with their friends than taking part in competitions. Secondly, with the increased pace of life, the people are having limited amount of free time, so they cannot take part in games regularly or take play daily. For example the people working in MNCs are having limited time for sports due to day to day work pressures, so many MNCs add a sports centre in there office to encourage people to play sports just for a change. The basic aim of these sports centre is not to build fitness levels but just to give employees a source of recreation.
However, on the other side the people who take part in sports actively have some different view point. The people taking part in sports actively, want to improve there fitness level. Government spends lots of budgets on health schemes to create the healthy society. If individuals take participation in sports seriously then fitness level of people will improve and result in saving of government funds. Taking parts in sports also enhance the feeling of co-operation and social bonding between people. For instance, the schools who encourage students to take parts in sports provide better fitness and teachings of social values to its students.
In conclusion, we can say that sports plays a vital role in human development both mentally and physically. With the change in life style and eating habits it is impossible to stay a healthy life without taking part in sports. According to me the reasons may differ from person to person but benefits of sports in building a healthy society can never be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82677165354 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46552688574 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6320791104 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.166666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183382669214 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672924837831 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466766832915 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116348622861 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392873777209 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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