Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Globalization has influenced every field of life, agricultural products have no exception from that.
I agree to the above notation that if people prefer local produce more than the imported food items, the economy and environment both would be definitely benefited with this change. In this essay, let us discuss whether the pros of eating local food outweigh the cons.
Let us first examine the reasons why people are attracting towards the eatables produced in foreign countries. Firstly, people are always open to try something new to eat because they feel bored eating same old local produce again and again. Secondly, nowadays the foreign food items are easily available. These food items are usually transported from one country to another by air, resulting in lot of air pollution, so if the people prefer the local produce food items, the air pollution can be reduced indirectly. Not only this the additional preservatives are added to packed foods to keep them fresh for long time, these chemicals are not only harmful to our health but also to our environment.
Agriculture is the backbone of economies of many countries. Indian economy is largely dependent of agriculture produce. If Indian government import food items from any other country Indian farmers will suffer. On the other hand, if government promote local produce the local farmers will be benefited. The better economic growth can be achieved by increasing the exports and reducing the import of food items, this can be done only by increasing the production of local food and encouraging people to eat local food.
As discussed above, it can be concluded that, the advantages of eating local produce outweigh the disadvantages. If people prefer to eat local food items more than the imported food items the economy and environment both will be have a positive impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14569536424 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65412584823 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0772834917 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38960033516 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125015429762 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811941866285 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216865789433 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0973094276197 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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