Your child is going on the three days school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip. Suggest what you could do to help during the trip. Ask other questions about the trip.
Dear Sir,
My name is James, my daughter Mary is studying in class fifth in your school. As your school is organizing an international trip to Toronto for group of students and my daughter is also joining that group. I came to know that you are looking for parents to go along with that group, so I want to volunteer my name for the trip by the means of this letter.
You will be delighted to know that, I worked in Toronto for 5 years in Sun Software solution during the initial years of my career. If I join the group, it would be win-win situation for both of us, as it will give me an opportunity to meet my old friends as well as I will take care of your students to make this tour a great success. I am familiar about the main tourist attractions and transport facilities of that area. I know few people there who are working with some of the great hotels and restaurants so comfortable stay and hygienic food will not be a problem for your students.
I request you, could share your travel plans details, like date and total number of students going. If you want me to arrange the booking in restaurants for meals, kindly provide the details for the food preferences in Veg and Non-Veg categories.
Hope you will consider my request positively and give me the opportunity to help to organize a better trip.
Yours faithfully,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 470, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...w few people there who are working with some of the great hotels and restaurants so comfort...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... not be a problem for your students. I request you, could share your travel pl...
^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nize a better trip. Yours faithfully, James
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48178137652 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5286374674 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9815389129 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.636363636 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200285982439 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078496585763 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623518957477 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115614070967 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063383340379 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.