Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...........
Dear
I am a regular passenger on the 388 bus service. I have always found it to be a good service both punctual and clean. However, over the last two weeks this situation has changed. The 388 is no longer reliable and it is dirty.
The bus now arrives behind schedule. For example, on the 16th and 17th November the bus that was scheduled to arrive at Springwood Street at 8.30am arrived at 8.40am. Then, on 21st, 22nd and 23rd November the bus was not only late, but it failed to stop as well.
In addition, the bus is no longer as clean as it previously was. I have noticed papers and bottles down the aisle and under seats.
The deterioration of the 388 bus service is unacceptable, and I request that you do everything possible to return the service to its former punctual and clean level.
I look forward to your swift attention to this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear I am a regular passenger on the 388 bus ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, then, well, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58490566038 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51418191775 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9047090837 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0846044738922 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340202056719 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377546183759 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416207149871 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244288908217 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.