Write a letter to the manager of local council who is planning to pull down a historic building in your area due to lack of money to repair it. Expressing how unhappy you are and cover:
Why the building is important
What can be done with it in future
How to raise money for repairing it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I writing to express my unhappiness with the council’s decision to demolish the local museum due to shortage of funds for its renovation.
First of all, the museum is proud of our locality and it connects us all to the history of founding fathers of our town. In addition, it is a great medium to encourage and teach young generation about the past and its importance, which they will never learn at school. There are so many beautiful stories surrounded to that place.
In future, some more antique pieces should be installed to attract more visitors, which eventually will generate more revenue for maintenance. Even some food stall can also be constructed to make it more happening place to visit on weekends. Consequently, it will raise money for itself in the future.
Instead of destroying the heritage site, locals can organize an event to raise money, which can be utilized for its restoration. Further, it can be made more sustainable by charging visitors’ entry fee as it is free of cost now. I am sure nobody would resist to pay minimal fee for a visit.
I look forward to hearing from you soon with some positive news.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
Dear Sir or Madam, I writing to express my unhappiness with ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ul stories surrounded to that place. In future, some more antique pieces should be ins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, so, even so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93170731707 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77567405301 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687804878049 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7049000599 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15848654064 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521840885327 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536085055677 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900900446938 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646156144449 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.