Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letterdescribe the item you lostexplain how you lost ittell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to claim the vehicle insurance that I had taken three months back from your esteemed organization.

Yesterday evening, I went to Gopalan mall for shopping. I was driving a Black color Maruti Suzuki Baleno, version-Sigma1. Due to full parking in the mall, I had to park it in the public place. After 4 hours of purchasing, I came back to the parking lot to take the car. To my surprise, It was not parked at the designated place.

Then, I contacted the mall's security team and near around people to trace it. Unfortunately, nobody could find it out after 6 hours of rigorous search. Finding no hope to get it back, I went to a local police station to file an FIR. The FIR reference number is 5657657, attaching the same for your reference.

Since the policy covers the car, and It had cost me 6.0 lakhs at that time, request you to approve the application and compensate me the full value of the car. Please confirm the list of documents that I need to submit to claim the insurance. I would highly appreciate your prompt action in this case.

If you need further information, please call me on my mobile number 7678979.

I am looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours Sincerely

SDD

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'malls'' or 'mall's'?
Suggestion: malls'; mall's
...ignated place. Then, I contacted the malls security team and near around people to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64840182648 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64380801399 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639269406393 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9493713415 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.625 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6875 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136426382764 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393942068832 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472642490915 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706115868064 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444994932253 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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