Dear Sir,
Recently, I have seen your newspaper column in which a few people are nominated for the lifetime achievement award for uplifting the tribe-community. Therefore, I would like to suggest one more deserving person name, Mr.Ram Gopal, who stays in Vijaya Bank Colony, Bangalore.
He has dedicated his 30 years of life in upgrading destitute tribal women's life. Not only, he has provided vocational training to make them financially independent but also educated their poverty-stricken children in various subjects. Now, one of the students from the same batch has joined a renowned bank as a clerk. Is it not a great accomplishment? I trust it is.
We should recognize the justifiable person for all those efforts which made towards the upliftment of the needy people. We can reward him with some monetary amount and certificate which may work as a catalyst in improving these impoverished people life.
Hopefully, you consider the suggestion and will give the award to the most deserving candidate, Mr.Ram Gopal.
Yours Faithfully
Anna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ram
...gest one more deserving person name, Mr.Ram Gopal, who stays in Vijaya Bank Colony,...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ram
...ard to the most deserving candidate, Mr.Ram Gopal. Yours Faithfully Anna ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39880952381 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04849666493 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.744047619048 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5412008182 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4545454545 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157973776329 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482563833669 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680521816383 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826065098133 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753958571757 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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