Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry martin, local resident of Greenwich Avenue. this morning, I read in your newspaper about your award ceremony for the most responsible citizen of the society. I am writing this letter to suggest you the name of most eligible person for this award and the prize suitable for him.
First of all , I think that one of our neighbor, Mr. Johnson deserves this award more than anybody else. Let me explain you his act of bravery in detail, last year there was a fire in near by school and this person put his life in danger and saved the life of thirteen children who were stuck inside the classrooms. His prompt action and act of bravery has brought happiness and joy in many families who could have lost their children due to that unexpected mishappening. His great deed was not acknowledged by any authority until now and it would be really great if you do it so. It will give him courage and motivation to help the needy people in future also.
He is not so financially sound, he is a retired school teacher and he totally depends on pension for his living. Offering him a monetary support or a medical insurance for him and his wife would be the great award for him.
I think you will consider my suggestion seriously and give this award to most deserving candidate.
Yours sincerely
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...in, local resident of Greenwich Avenue. this morning, I read in your newspaper about...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... prize suitable for him. First of all , I think that one of our neighbor, Mr. J...
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Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...n detail, last year there was a fire in near by school and this person put his life in ...
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Line 4, column 657, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...tion to help the needy people in future also. He is not so financially sound, he ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61764705882 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44923243443 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0306601053 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222628781299 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078845164245 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582662446224 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125857480121 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640650174468 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.