You are spending your summer holidays in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend abroad. In your letter,
1) Describe the place you are in.
2) Explain why you like/dislike the house you are staying in.
3) Describe your favorite activities there.
Hi Balu,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you in pink of health. Where are you planning to spend your summer holidays? Well, my family has decided to go to my Aunt's place this time, which is in the countryside of Bangalore.
Although my aunt's house situated at the western ghats, it still has various amenities that no one can expect like swimming pool, lofty fruit trees, sports club, and party area. It seems like a resort which is covered by the tall green coffee and tea plantation.
However, the only problem in staying here is that there is a frequent power cut in this area. Due to which, It's become difficult to use electronic items like laptop and mobile. The good thing is that I've made a few new friends here who are brilliant at playing cricket and woodblock painting. They are helping me to learn it a new way.
Well, If asked, I would rate my experience in the countryside as genuinely astonishing, and I hope to take you here on your next visit to India.
I am waiting to hear from you soon!
Radha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ptop and mobile. The good thing is that Ive made a few new friends here who are bri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73015873016 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33651656313 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677248677249 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.215223655 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239982529679 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916610518964 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109878287847 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128068753395 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10182533015 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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