Write a letter to the sport club president about to conduct an event. You are a member of that club.
What is the event?
Whom I am inviting?
What is my role in this?
Dear Mr. President,
I am a senior member of the PE Sports club since 1990 and I am writing this letter to inform you to kindly consider my suggestion to open our club for social events on weekends during summer as the outdoor area is hardly booked for any events.
A social event is a great idea to maximize the use of our facilities and a perfect method to create a hub for our growing community. In addition, this can contribute further to our growing our revenue lines.
Times Sports magazine hosts weekend events for community development and hosting their events at our club would be a noble cause and since the event will covered by the magazine, it will give good publicity to our club in addition to food revenue.
I have been an event manager for 12 years and I can be present all day to ensure the event sails smoothly. My wife has also offered to help over the weekends if the events were booked for children.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Liam Ryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. President, I am a senior member of the PE Sports cl...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cover'
Suggestion: cover
... a noble cause and since the event will covered by the magazine, it will give good publ...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Liam Ryan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50555555556 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34016855993 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5871407189 44.8134815571 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279475617754 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102531020347 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907403851937 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122383713193 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103803477884 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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