Some parents and teachers think that children s behavior should be strictly controlled While some think that children should be free to behave Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many peoples think that children’s behaviour should be proper always and other peoples and teachers think to give freedom to kids. For me, good behavior is important and mothers should tell child to show proper behaviour. If we tell children that father will make punishment if not listening than maybe children get scary and want to be good kids. My father always telling us correct things and so me and my brother grow up to good kids.
My uncle have very strict rule in house and my cousin always scary of father but one day get fed up and run away for 2 weeks to another place. Everybody feeling bad and shout at my uncle. My cousin comeback home but not same person, totally changed. If uncle give little freedom than maybe cousin not take this step.
All parents must be good for the child and get best behavior this will make kids grow up and become good person in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e but not same person, totally changed. If uncle give little freedom than maybe co...
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Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
... parents must be good for the child and get best behavior this will make kids grow up an...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ake kids grow up and become good person in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50310559006 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07927082268 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 506.74238477 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0614840622 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5555555556 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175145140326 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723796032725 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943343634423 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108323775905 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846946965748 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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