Write a Letter to a Tour company manager to appreciate your tour guide 1 Give your tour details 2 What do you like about the tour guide 3 Suggest ways for the manager to appreciate the guide

Essay topics:

Write a Letter to a Tour company manager to appreciate your tour guide.

1) Give your tour details
2)What do you like about the tour guide
3) Suggest ways for the manager to appreciate the guide.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my happiness with your company's tour guide, Mr Marsh who showed us the beautiful heritage city of Surat last week.

I booked a day tour of your website. The bus was on time and the schedule of the day was given to us by the tour guide as soon as the bus started. It covered various unique places such as a science museum, the oldest city temple, the statue of unity and a rose garden. Everything was scheduled perfectly and a tour guide made it sure that we are able to explore the city conveniently.

Mr Marsh was not only knowledgable but also interactive. He has deep knowledge of the city and never shied away from expressing it to tourists. Moreover, he was cooperative, serene and jovial which made my tour enjoyable.

Since Mr Marsh was at par with my expectations, I would like you to appreciate his great performance in front of other employees in your organization. Adding to it a small gift as a gesture from my side will also make happy and wanted.

I would like to visit Surat again and go for another tour with Mr Marsh.
Thank you for the memorable trip and the best tour guide.

Your's faithfully
John Patel.

Votes
Average: 7.7 (6 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...guide. Yours faithfully John Patel.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57746478873 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60407261947 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6593375357 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274363623346 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102978540882 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905608354035 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154189471439 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736986423388 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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