Write a letter to your boss apologizing for the recent meeting you missed at work.
1. Apologies for missing the meeting.
2. Explain what happened.
3. Say what you will do to compensate.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to you to express my sincere apology for not attending the
recent important meeting. As I am aware, it was for a new software launch
for our company’s employees and mandatory to attend.
If I may explain myself, I was eagerly waiting for this event as I wanted
to learn this software for my bright future.
I am a workaholic person and had never missed such events in my career
so far. But, last night, while I was in deep sleep, I heard my mom calling
me for help. She needed medical assistance immediately so I took her
to hospital as I was the only one present in the house. She was treated
for a stroke and went through multiple tests. I was in a state of panic or
trauma and consequently completely forgot about the meeting.
Would you please accept my apology for not attending such a vital
seminar? I had a telephonic conversation with our company’s web
programmer and he agreed to teach me that software this weekend. I
assure you that I will keep serving our company in the best way.
I hope you will consider my situation favorably.
Yours sincerely,
Amanpreet Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...p serving our company in the best way. I hope you will consider my situation fav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64356435644 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6720569317 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3086673715 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1538461538 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.29896907216 372% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209162450261 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751655757984 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619224553901 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690159097386 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663723392113 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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