Write a letter to your city council to clean the city Write the following what the council can do to make the city clean what the public can do to make the city clean how it will benefit the community of the city | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your city council to clean the city.
Write the following:
• what the council can do to make the city clean
• what the public can do to make the city clean
• how it will benefit the community of the city

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Yash Mehta, a resident of Old Brook colony, Milton Keynes, and am writing this to provide some valuable suggestions in order to clean our city.
Unfortunately, the city is contaminated by many tourists due to the last football event on 31st December. I would like to suggest the management, firstly, to clean the main roads as they are covered with garbage. Another task that council’s cleaning team can do which is clean bushes and gardens, especially collect all litters and bottles.

Of course, my other fellow residents, other citizens and I will surely be helpful to you. What we can do to tidy the city is that we will gather all kind of garbage and put into several bins and clean the residential roads surrounding our colonies. Also, I have spoken to MK city college chairperson, and he has agreed to help us by sending some students for these activities.

This would surely be helpful to our community as in many ways. This rubbish is the key factor to develop some harmful diseases. By cleaning this, not only we can maintain our good health, but we can also save children from the diseases. Also, clean city would be beneficial to attract many other tourists and our community can generate revenue from it.

I hope you find the above solutions worthwhile for execution of clean city. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,
Yash P Mehta

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...of Old Brook colony, Milton Keynes, and am writing this to provide some valuable s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, so, while, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83127572016 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61880407236 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4327766909 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8571428571 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317645114417 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904428918076 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776128387145 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153542954368 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735349689002 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, so, while, kind of, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments