Write a letter to your college’s administration department complaining about the college’s facilities.In your letter include: what the problem is how this problem has affected you what the college should do to fix this problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a second year student of sports management at the Faculty of Physical Education.I thank you for your hard work as a college administrator. But I'm writing a letter of complaint about some of the college facilities.Since our college is a physical education college, it should be excellent in terms of sports facilities.But not only are these devices old, they are small in number and not responsive to all students.On the other hand, the self-service of the college has a lot of problems.One of the problems is that the food provided is high in fat and harmful to the health of students.And another problem is the self-service space, which is not only small but often dirty.
I have suggestions for resolving these problems and hope you will accept them.It is best to contract with a sports equipment company to fix problems with sports equipment and replace old ones with new ones so you will not have to pay a lot of money.You can also talk about the self-service bar where I work. The company does all the best in cleaning and cooking food.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully
Mohammadpour
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85643564356 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9340695027 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 16.3608247423 244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 172.872207136 44.8134815571 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.2 76.5299724578 256% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.4 16.8248392259 240% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.2 4.34317383033 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236671862803 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979458498334 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682346963453 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121467371384 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890398008621 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 8.37731958763 259% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 8.54432989691 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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