Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
Dear john,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to our family function on the occasion of my parents golden jubilee wedding anniversary, which is on 22nd of june at our club house.
As this is my parents 50th wedding anniversary, I decided to celebrate grandly with all our dear ones. I have planned to invite all my parent's colleagues and friends to cherish their young days memories. Also, I have organised a couple dance for all the elderly people on old melody songs. Since you are a wonderful guitarist, I would like you to play a song for my parents, it will be a great surprise for them.
I would really appreciate if you visit and join us in this party, as this will be great time to introduce you with my whole family. they have heard a lot about you, as I always talk about fun activities that we do together and I also share our officail tour pictures with them as well, they will be truelly happy to meet you.
Waiting for a positive revert from your side. Hope to see you soon.
Warm Regards
Harry
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h is on 22nd of june at our club house. As this is my parents 50th wedding anniv...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... to introduce you with my whole family. they have heard a lot about you, as I always...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3756097561 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31223628655 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3493089021 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211408525078 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710752795389 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436582873904 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124526499432 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026230536762 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.