Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.Write a letter to the | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Although you have never formally studied computing. You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
-Explain why you are writing
-Describe your circumstances
Ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course.

<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Actually, I am
a computer savvy since childhood but I had interest in marketing too
so I pursued MBA from Oxford University. Although, I do not have any formal
certification in computing but in my free time I always learn the computer tips
and tricks from Youtube channel. Also my
brother is a computer graduate so he has also made me learn many softwares such
as MS WORD, MS power point, photoshop etc .<o:p></o:p>

<span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">This six month
course in animation offered by your college has risen my wish to learn computer
professionally. this course would definitely help me to make attractive
presentations in future so as to attract more custormers. With due respect, I wanted to ask you could guide me that
if by any sort, I could join this course leaving the complusion of elementary course. I would be really grateful to you. For
any querry or further information regarding my educational career details, you could contact me at
401-401-4011 or email me at harry.sandhu@abc.com I hope to get a positive
revert from you soon.<o:p></o:p>

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 89, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pellerror'>Youtube channel. Also my brother is a computer graduate so h...
^^^^
Line 14, column 42, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s MS WORD, MS power point, photoshop etc .

^^
Line 18, column 17, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...wish to learn computer professionally. this course would definitely help me to make...
^^^^
Line 19, column 73, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...span class='hiddensuggestion'>so as to attract more ^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, regarding, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.85567010309 415% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3845.0 937.175257732 410% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 384.0 206.0 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.0130208333 4.54256449028 220% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 9.20388949086 2.54303337028 362% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 180.0 127.690721649 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46875 0.622605031667 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 976.5 290.88556701 336% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.5 1.41237113402 177% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 352.664656579 44.8134815571 787% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.5 76.5299724578 502% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.4 16.8248392259 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.29896907216 442% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386784553178 0.216113520407 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552405610104 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054558692191 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386559660272 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492670088885 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.9 8.37731958763 536% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -43.23 70.7449484536 -61% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 3.82989690722 530% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 7.45979381443 385% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.37 8.71597938144 475% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 41.2886597938 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 8.62886597938 243% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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