You have rented a car for few day from an agency. However, there are some problems with car.
Tell him/her the problen of the car.
What you want the agency to do now
How you feel about the problem.
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry Martin, a frequent customer of your renowned car rental agency. Last week, I rented a car (NY4587) from your agency from 22nd june to 27 june. Through my journey, I experienced few issues with that car. I am writing this letter to bring your concern about those issues.
Let me elucidate in details. few of my friends came to visit my hometown therefore I booked a car with you for five days, my booking id is AIR4532IB. However, my experience was really annoying. Firstly, we ordered Seven seater innova car but I got shocked to hear that there was some strike at your agency so you sent me Honda accord. Anyhow, I agreed with that but later we came to know that it is a diesel car, it was really tough for me to drive it as it was my first experience. Also to make the matters worse, there was a permanent child lock on back seats.
To compensate me for this tremendous inconvenience, I request you to refund my money as soon as possible. I had heard a lot about your comfortable and trouble-free services but honestly my experience was just the opposite.
I request you to consider my complaint seriously and fix all the aforementioned issues to maintain your goodwill and customer satisfaction.
Yours sincerely
Harry Martin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
...issues. Let me elucidate in details. few of my friends came to visit my hometown...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cars'.
Suggestion: cars
...Firstly, we ordered Seven seater innova car but I got shocked to hear that there wa...
^^^
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...drive it as it was my first experience. Also to make the matters worse, there was a ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, honestly, however, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73580228784 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2512186214 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8571428571 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229799066682 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749722121004 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611860473702 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130173107959 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611642930997 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.