Some people argue that government should stop supporting the professional sporting events and cultural programs and instead support schools from where students can take up sports and arts. What is your opinion.
Nowadays, many professional events that are funded by government are organized around the world and we all are huge admirer of such events. However, it is commonly argued by many that government should stop promoting the professional sporting and cultural programs and support schools instead. In my opinion, this is a nice suggestion and in this essay, I will provide supportive statements that make my opinion strong.
First of all, education institutions have large number of students in contrast to specific sporting or cultural event centers. If government support schools, then more number of children could benefit out of it. Also in schools, children are divided in different classes based on their age so it would be easier to arrange sports activity in separate batches.
Also sometimes due to financial crisis or personal issues students could not join sports clubs or cultural programs explicitly. However, every student irrespective of gender, economic background, goes to school for education. Therefore, this trend would benefit everyone, an underprivileged student, boys, girls, juniors and seniors and give them opportunity to enroll in extra-curricular activities and improve their skills. For instance, in male dominating societies such as rural areas in India, girls are not treated equal to boys and hence providing sports training and cultural activities is not preferred by many families but if this facility is available at schools then girls could also mark their presence in sports field and there would be more female badminton players like Sania Mirza, Sania Nehwal and female boxing champion like Marry Kom.
Moreover, if government support schools for such cultural activities and sport programs this will definitely raise job-opportunities for trainers, coaches in schools. As people love to work for government sector as compared to private activity centers ,this will further mitigate the critical issue of unemployment.
In conclusion, It is really appreciable that government provide support for these adventurous activities. However, it will be more fruitful, if government promote schools for such activities as every school going child could enjoy it and it will offer job opportunities also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55263157895 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9056575266 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.379869802 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28830777742 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11320248514 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104689390754 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170521072332 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805689471808 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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