You and your colleagues just came back from a foreign language training. Write a
letter to the manager and say
– explain how you and your colleagues enjoyed the training
– suggest more training sessions in the future
– say when and where it should be conducted.
Dear mr. Johnson,
I am Harry martin working as a software engineer with your organisation from last seven years. With due respect, I am writing this letter to thankyou for offering us an opportunity to learn chinese language as a part of employee empowerment program. I and my colleagues enjoyed the course thoroughly.
Initially, we all thought this course as an extra-burden but eventually we started loving it. The trainer Mr. Xiang is incredibly smart he related the language with our native language and used various pictorial illustration that made it possible for us to learn so quickly and easily.
On behalf of all the trainees, I request you to arrange an intermediate course of the same language. it would be truly beneficial for us to communicate interactively with our chinese clients and may further improve our productivity.
This institute also offer on-site training program, this way we could attent chinese classes at our conference hall and at a convenient time. I believe it would be great, if these thirty minute classes are held twice a week that could complete the course in two months. It would provide comfortability to the employees and also more number of employees could enroll and take benefit out of it.
Once again, thankyou so much for this great learning opportunity and I hope you consider our request seriously and talk to higher management for the approval of same.
Hope to get a positive revert from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Harry Martin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...termediate course of the same language. it would be truly beneficial for us to com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06477732794 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8453676329 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2693670776 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120627618542 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450059108254 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350186822875 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609857426573 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309708517307 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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