Dear Maulik,
I hope this will find you you healthy. I am glad to invite you at a small party, which we has been organized at my place.
I'd like to gracefully inform you that my younger brother, Raj, has finally cracked examination of CET, which is mandatory to be qualified for getting admission in one of the IIM institutes. Isn't it a proud moment for us! To express it, we've arranged a small gathering in my house's garden area.
We have been planning for one week to make this party a success. My one of aunts will prepare food for all the guest as she is keen in cooking deliciously. My father and my elder brother have arranged for music system and lights. So that, we would have some dance after having dinner.
I will badly need you for helping me out for creating a congratulating speech for my brother, as you are an avid writer. You have to come at my place from morning only on next Saturday.
See you soon,
Riddham
- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people s behaviour What is your opinion 56
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 87
- Wealthy countries should accept more numbers of refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children Do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business Discuss both views and give your opinion 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 23, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: you
Dear Maulik, I hope this will find you you healthy. I am glad to invite you at a s...
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Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...o invite you at a small party, which we has been organized at my place. Id like to...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ich we has been organized at my place. Id like to gracefully inform you that my y...
^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Isn't
...admission in one of the IIM institutes. Isnt it a proud moment for us! To express it...
^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
...t a proud moment for us! To express it, weve arranged a small gathering in my houses...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36781609195 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41458662381 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9956707725 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0909090909 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126475017501 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588766958628 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041987974878 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847212984123 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470251131066 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.