Dear John,
Although I came to Hanoi yesterday, the meeting of our customer had some problems. that is my mistake and I am extremely apologize about the convenience.
I had a date with partner company at 9 am to discuss about new product of our company and give them some test data of the sample. I can not believe that I spend two hours for coming that place from my hotel. The traffic jam was strongly terrible after heavy rain, taxi driver move slowly and carefully and in a hurry I forgot my document in taxi. I called for the taxi company immediately and they said that they will return it in three hours. Luckily, partner company gave me another date at 8 am and today is a sunny day, so I hope that we will have numerous advantage.
Faithfully,
Mary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ting of our customer had some problems. that is my mistake and I am extremely apolog...
^^^^
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'apologized'.
Suggestion: apologized
.... that is my mistake and I am extremely apologize about the convenience. I had a date w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...n three hours. Luckily, partner company gave me another date at 8 am and today is a ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 622.0 937.175257732 66% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41134751773 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42661002128 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673758865248 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.9016852596 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 4.34317383033 7% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11780221701 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041806679026 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462745924802 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791372953921 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401007613517 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.