Write a letter to your neighbor about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home In the letter you should describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should ta

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your neighbor about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home.

In the letter, you should:
describe the damage
say how you feel about this problem
suggest to him what actions he should take.

Dear Mr. Khan,

I am writing this letter to complain regarding the damage of my car, due to your negligence, right in front of my house.

As you already know that early this morning, you hit my car badly and broke completely the rear side of it. The rear bumper is out of shape, and it cannot be refit on the car. Also, back lights severely damaged owing to the impact. The former is still affordable; however, the latter is barely in my budget.

I would like to express my frustration in this regard. Recently, I carried out the overhauling of my vehicle and since then I was taking great care of it. This maintenance cost me a great deal of money. As you have been driving a car for quite a while, I believe it might have happened accidentally.

I would request you to pay for the compensation because my vehicle does not have any insurance. Estimate for it has been taken and it would cost around USD 5000 for replacement of both bumper and lights. Cost estimation is attached to this letter.

I am looking forward for your quick response in this matter.

Yours sincerely,

Salman Khan

Votes
Average: 5.7 (6 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, regarding, so, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58793969849 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52322361428 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6007446128 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.2142857143 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191374807137 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651915532438 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052592405179 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109406856866 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046486149222 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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