It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programmes has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Television, these days, has become one of the most significant mediums of communication. People spend their whole day watching a variety of shows. Some people believe that broadcasting violent shows on TV has adverse ramifications on people’s social growth. For that reason, reduction of it is essential. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, aggression on TV has detrimental effects on people of disparate age groups, including adults and children. Although the former one is more sensible and mature enough in distinguishing between the reality and the fantasy, a sense of mistrust and insecurity is still prevalent among them. Children, on the other hand, are immature and this group is affected the most. They are inundated by an inordinate number of programmes, most of which depict crime investigation, or a serial killer. For example, Shooter and Peaky Blinder, both are crime-based shows. After watching it, youngsters try to imitate those actions in their real life. According to a recent survey, conducted by the students of Dehli University, more than 75 per cent of juvenile delinquency is because of these television programmes.
These problems could be resolved by taking apt actions. Governments have formed different regulatory bodies to regulate those shows. For instance, in India, IEMRA (Indian Electronic Media Regulatory Authority) monitors TV channels and numerous licenses have been revoked, during the last few years, because of law violation. Proper regulation by these bodies can easily solve these issues. Therefore, limitations ought to be implemented on it.
In summary, some TV programmes have deleterious impact on people of different age groups. I absolutely agree that it is a high time that concerned authorities should take action swiftly. If governments did not respond to it, it would be too late to mitigate the adverse effects of it on our society, which are evident in the form of increased crime rates.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in summary, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34185303514 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97577380114 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651757188498 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.311708385 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.65 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125541453381 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349447488891 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475848617987 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776688766268 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383959705874 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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