You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Francis,
I hope you’re doing very well. I’ve finally shifted to a new house few days ago. The reason was that there was an insufficient living space in my old house. I told you about my living condition you know it was literally difficult for me to live in a small house. My both children are growing up rapidly, and living in a two bedrooms apartment was not easily. So I decided to replace my house and swiftly started reaching for new one.
Let me tell you about my new house: it is bigger, it has a swimming pool. My children love swimming pool. It has four bedrooms with a luxurious kitchen. It has also three washrooms with an awesome TV lounge. How could I forget about a garden and separate car parking area? The garden is full of different kind of plants. There is a private car parking space inside my house, where I can park two to three cars simultaneously.
Why don’t you come and visit my new house? I’m sure you’re going to love it. New address and telephone number are mentioned below, give me a call anytime and do let me know when you’re coming.
Hope to see you momentarily, give my sincere regards to uncle and aunt.
Lots of love,
EK
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58525345622 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55446729268 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3555930298 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.2777777778 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0555555556 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158422783082 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523542595006 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583362731421 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984878311807 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329104007202 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.