Write a letter to the manager to ask for permission that you would like to participate in a training course.
In your letter, you should:
give details of the course
why it is useful for you
how it will benefit your work.
Dear Mr. Khan,
I am writing this letter to acquire your permission for participation in a training course, which will be helpful for me and the company.
The course is organized by University of Sydney and its title is “Project Management with Communication”. Its duration is four weeks and classes will not affect my work, as they are in the evenings from 7 PM to 9 PM. It will commence on February 26, 2019 and finish on March 27, 2019.
This course would be advantageous for my personal grooming. This is because some very imperative skills will be taught in it, such as time management, coping with difficult situations, dealing with work pressure and speaking with confidence.
However, it will not only be worthwhile for me but also for the company. Since I am working in the department of projects that deals with several projects at a time, the above traits will increase company’s productivity. Communication is one of the key requirements on which our number of clients depends; therefore, it is important to polish it for the benefit of our organization.
I hope that the above reasons are convincing enough for your favorable and swift response.
Yours sincerely,
Salman Khan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15887881744 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651741293532 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6755993025 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5454545455 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249369945441 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927325427255 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858873700083 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148871598688 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114099468548 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.