Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Working life and personal life both are completely disparate from each other. Some people enjoy their office life whereas others house life. While a few people do not have any problem spending their free time with office workers, others give preference to keep office and private life separated. This essay will discuss both these viewpoints and explain why precedence should be given to personal life.
To begin with, owing to the development of great understanding among employees, some people believe that the leisure time ought to be devoted to colleagues. In other words, this strengthens relationships and helps minimizing hesitation between workmates. Consequently, the employees’ confidence escalates and work productivity increases ultimately. It also aids employees’ retention at work. According to the recent statistics, more than ninety per cent people, in India, feel satisfied with their jobs when they meet their colleagues after office hours.
On the other hand, this approach has adverse effects on a family life of an individual. Staying all the time away from households creates rifts amongst them because they do not get an opportunity to discuss their problems. As a result, they feel unhappy and especially children feel deprived of love which causes sometimes marriage failure. According to the recent survey, conducted by BBC News, more than 80 per cent of people who spend their unoccupied time with other than family members fail to maintain their married life.
In summary, although work life is imperative, people must prioritize their families first. In my opinion, developing decent relationship could be possible by living in harmony with workmates in office and there may be no need to spend free post office hours with them. This is because working hours are already long enough to develop understanding. Personal life has its own importance that needs leisure time and might become unsuccessful if neglected. It is, therefore, recommended that people should give their unoccupied time to their households.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to minimize' or 'minimize'.
Suggestion: to minimize; minimize
...his strengthens relationships and helps minimizing hesitation between workmates. Consequen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, in summary, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46081504702 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82595925919 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.962668109 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486152272797 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142200851103 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119040462646 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296961689047 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892617212444 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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