Some people point out that there will be less international travel in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
Traveling overseas is gaining popularity among people in many countries. People travel for disparate reasons, including business growth and education. Some people believe that this abroad traveling trend will decline in the future. In my opinion, it would be entirely advantageous.
To begin with, one of the most evident positive effects would be on the environment. The excessive greenhouse gases dissipation has deleterious impact on our surrounding since it contains an inordinate amount of carbon dioxide. These co2 accumulate onto the Earth’s surface and eventually damage the ozone layer, which has already started several years ago. Furthermore, the frequency of cross-boundary traveling is much higher, in many countries, than the domestic. Therefore, the contribution of those harmful gases by it is significantly higher. Some environment specialists estimate that the emission of carbon dioxide by cross-country traveling is more than 80 per cent of the total emission. If this damaging pattern of the ozone layer continued for the next several years, it might be destroyed and the Ultraviolet radiations would enter the Earth, which might make the human existence on the Earth impossible.
Another important point to consider is related to the country’s survival. As almost all countries rely on the export and import of goods, they are completely dependent on others for boosting their economy. If the trend of visiting other countries declines, people may become more self-sufficient and may promote their own goods in their country. For example, Saudi Arabia is the biggest importer of contemporary technology from around the world and is relying solely on the UK and China. However, if they refuse to trade, Saudi Arabia will start developing their own technology.
In summary, going abroad trend might reduce someday, yet I believe that this would be positive because our environment will be safe from detrimental effects of the gasses. In addition, countries might become independent by relying on their own technology, instead of others.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in summary, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51572327044 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97551417158 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3722934664 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188798212792 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592461066226 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748049754799 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127358246437 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860267720927 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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