Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?
Neighbors play a very vital role in our lives. In the past, people would meet them daily to discuss problems of their lives. However, a large number of people, these days, are not acquainted to some of them. There are numerous reasons for it, but this essay will outline some major of them and also give appropriate suggestions to solve it.
To begin with, most people do not know their some neighbors because of extremely busy schedule. In other words, almost everyone, in the modern world, spends excessive time at work, which is the prime reason. As competition at work has increased, more and more people stay late hours to meet the targets of business. According to the recent survey, in India, more than 80 per cent of workers leave their homes in the morning and come back late at night.
The above reason is understandable but this problem could be solved by making work-life balance. Although being competitive in office is important, this does not mean to compromise personal life completely. People should take part in disparate social gatherings that are arranged in community. This helps in understanding different people and, as a result, leads to the development of a decent relationship among the people of neighborhood. Therefore, people ought to understand the significance of both lives and keep it separate.
In summary, due to spending a great deal of time in offices, a huge number of people are not aware of their most neighbors. However, by elimination of imbalance between working life and private life, this problem might be resolved. It is recommended that everyone should meet their neighbors because it cannot only solve some problems of neighborhood, but is also worthwhile socially. It is predicted that this trend of being socially isolated might decrease in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...scuss problems of their lives. However, a large number of people, these days, are not acquainted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, in summary, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7398296784 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3614744588 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267027099022 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800344992075 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613686489351 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158227501861 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738301513616 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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