Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
The consumption of sugar is quite a topic of debate among many people. It is often argued that the excessive intake of sugar should be controlled by government authorities, whereas others believe that the sugar consumption in daily diet should be regulated at personal level. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and will explain why governments' efforts are more imperative.
There are certain valid reasons due to which people tend to believe that higher authorities are responsible for reducing the use of sugar. Firstly, governments can impose heavy taxes on sugary items that might lead to reducing the sale of those products. In Australia, for instance, it has been seen that after increasing the taxes on such products, people start avoiding those products. Secondly, governments can arrange awareness campaigns to educate public about the ill effects of sugar. A good illustration for this is that many people have been influenced by governments social media campaigns and have declined the use of sugar in their everyday food. Due to aforementioned reasons people have opinion that governments can take preventive measures to control sugar in daily use.
On the contrary, it is said that regulation of sugar intake in diet is feasible at an individual level. Every person has his own metabolic rate and knows his limitations about how to control the sugar level. For example, a person who consumes higher sugar can look after the sugar concentration in the body by doing regular exercises. In addition to this, by changing routine diet plan and strict check on sugar intake, various diseases can be avoided. Hence, with the help of exercise and disciplined diet, sugar level in the body can be regulated.
In conclusion, although sugar level can be controlled by proper workout and limited use of sweet products, I strongly believe that the legislative powers can play a pivotal role in reducing the intake of sugar by levying heavy taxes and awareness campaigns.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16770186335 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73976415536 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5892774918 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270136683683 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987557536733 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039639061108 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16276958526 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315625601862 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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