More people are spending their free time watching movies. Why is this? Is it a good thing or bad thing?
Movies, these days, are gaining popularity among many people. While some people consider as a best pastime activity, others disagree. This essay will outline a few important reasons why people choose to watch a movie in their leisure time and then explain why this is an indecent activity to do.
To begin with, watching a movie is less demanding and usually almost free of cost. After a tiring day at work, no one might like to do activities such as jogging, running, swimming. Owing to the fact that sitting in front of a TV or a computer screen, or even in a cinema, viewer does not require to do anything physical. Therefore, most people prefer it as it is entertaining without any effort. What is more, this type of entertainment often does not require any huge amount. Most people watch it on televisions, where it is free, others subscribe to Netflix, which is a website where an inordinate number of movies are available at a very low price.
The above reasons are understandable, yet this sort of activity has numerous drawbacks. Firstly, it is a sedentary hobby that can cause some health problems, which are evident in our society. Obesity and heart problems are decent examples of it. Most movies also highlight bad social issues that include murder and robbery. As a result, people, especially children, are affected by its influence. Several juvenile delinquencies and murders are as a result of watching crime movies.
In summary, seeing a movie in a free time may require minimum effort and money; however, its negative aspects are much more for adopting it as a hobby. I believe that people ought to avoid it and consider alternatives which are beneficial. It is predicted that in the future, more and more number of people might find other demanding hobbies more joyful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, so, then, therefore, while, in summary, sort of, such as, as a result, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66411033438 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4392469197 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24883899009 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613211536755 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597445808815 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145050770851 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597521246701 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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