Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sport tournaments, these days, are gaining popularity among people in many countries. They have been categorized into several different types, such as cricket, football, volleyball, tennis. While a few people believe that their arrangement could bring some problems, other think in contrast. In my opinion, these competitions are completely advantageous. This essay will discuss both viewpoints in detail and explain why I support them.
To begin with, one most evident benefit is the economic development of a country. When such sporting events are organized, people purchase enormous tickets to watch it. The collected amount is beneficial as it is sent to national treasure, which helps in the economic stability of host country. International sports enthusiasts also travel and that causes an increase tourism industry. For all these reasons, sports competitions can be worthwhile for host country in numerous ways. A recent PSL (Pakistan Super League) is a decent example of it.
These tournaments, on the other hand, might be problematic for the government and the general public. Provision of security is the concerned authority’s responsibility. Therefore, they use all available resources to make themselves ready for any unavoidable situation. Furthermore, people are affected by these events because several roads, during the competition, are closed for the public. They travel from alternate routes that cause traffic congestion issues as the majority of people take the same routes. For instance, during the Pakistan Super League event, stadium road was blocked and traffic was diverted to Shahrah-e-Faisal road, where people were stuck for several hours due to heavy traffic.
In summary, although arranging tournaments may result in some problems, the benefits it provides should not be overlooked. I believe that their advantages are much more for financial growth of the country. It is recommended that people ought to organize such events more and more in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ntries. They have been categorized into several different types, such as cricket, football, volle...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...collected amount is beneficial as it is send to national treasure, which helps in th...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... problematic for the government and the general public. Provision of security is the concerned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in contrast, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57894736842 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9833259503 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.339195472 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163970610456 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453458542056 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429900307935 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975577114722 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616886189873 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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