Write a letter to your neighbor who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals
1. introduce yourself
2. tell the problem
3. suggest solutions
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
Dear Mr. James,
I am your next house neighbor No. 48, and I am writing this letter to make a complaint about your dogs.
Here are the problems. First, due to the fact that I am an employee of a bank, I need to leave the house early in the morning, so I have to go to bed soon at night. However, your dogs in your garden make too much noise and make it almost impossible for both my family and me to rest. Additionally, my mother, which has had open-heart surgery recently, is staying with us. Your dogs’ barking constantly has caused irritation for her greatly.
Although it is your absolute right to keep pets at your place, here is a quiet neighborhood and requires your consideration to keep it quiet somehow. To resolve the problem, I am sincerely asking you to prevent your animals from coming to your yard after evening, when we seek a peaceful calm time to take a rest.
I hope this letter will not affect our friendship. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best regards,
Jack Smith
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48404255319 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51133126931 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.833906851 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6363636364 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326805232581 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901269593328 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769287364445 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168670000624 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664426218802 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.