Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reason for the noise apologise for the noise describe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter,

explain the reason for the noise
apologise for the noise
describe what action you will take

Hello Mr. Williams,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter regarding to your complain about noise from my house. Please consider this as my sincere apology. I would like to explain the cause of this inconvenience.

I have started taking guitar lessons from last 2 weeks. However, due to my busy schedule I was not able to attend classes on time. I asked my tutor to provide lessons at home however, I had not idea that sound of guitar will reach to your flat. I have very busy work routine and don't get spare time to pursue my hobby except night. To be very honest I did't realise that my hobby will cause trouble to you. Also, I totally understand that it would have been arduous for you to sleep with the noise of guitar daily.

I assure you that this problem will be solved as I am going to take classes at institution only. I have informed my teacher that he need not to come here. Additionally, for further I will take care of pitch and sound of my guitar if I will play at home. As well as, I am thankful to you to let me know about this situation I was not aware of.

I hope that this unpleasant situation will not hurt our friendship. Looking forward to meet you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...flat. I have very busy work routine and dont get spare time to pursue my hobby excep...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
...ve informed my teacher that he need not to come here. Additionally, for further I will ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...ot hurt our friendship. Looking forward to meet you soon. Yours Faithfully, John ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, regarding, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36086956522 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3302117025 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.182929353 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217686380245 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659017623714 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653546658267 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120015664409 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431025723449 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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