Dear Sir/ Ma'am,
I am writing this letter to express my concern regarding car parking at our office area. I reach office around 10:00 AM in the morning however, I don't find relevant space to park my car. There are many other employees like me who face the same issue.
I agree that there is not enough space in the basement, which is causing trouble for staff to park their vehicle. My most of the time gets waste in finding space on road. This whole situation consumes most of my time and in spite of reaching office early I am not able to punch my ID on time. In my opinion reason behind this whole situation is carelessness. People park their car anywhere without taking other into consideration. Also, due to lack of synchronisation in parking, we face difficulty in car parking. In addition to this, People from nearby companies also park their cars at our parking area. This behaviour of people should totally be prohibited.
With due respect I would like to propose solution in this matter. Company should hire a guard for particularly this purpose. A person should be assiend to control parking situation and make it available for office staff only. As well as, a provision of fine should be imposed for wrong parking. As well as, to avoid this troublesome condition I should be allowed to work from home. It is a serious issue and I will be great full if, management takes immediate action to save our precious time.
I am thankful to you for listening my problem. Any quick action in this regard will be highly appreciated.
Yours Sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'AM'.
Suggestion: AM
...ffice area. I reach office around 10:00 AM in the morning however, I dont find relevant space to ...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ound 10:00 AM in the morning however, I dont find relevant space to park my car. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 276.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70289855072 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56707948464 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2697447553 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.9 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247793494876 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709768533062 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050708124536 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138331858223 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120414800237 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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