Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree?
In today’s modern world computer has become the integral part of everyone’s life. It has been using in all the aspects across the globe. Children who are using computers at their early stage can masters the skills easily requires to cultivate their future. Now a days children spend most of their time on computer which could have negative or positive impact on their lives, can be narrate by personal, professional or academic point of view.
In Personal point of view, Computers could have great impact on developing child’s personality in all the manners, Internet is the most important tool that motivates them to learn plethora of information about the world, which any how will sharp their mind and pour them with abounded of knowledge which subsequently will make them confident and prepare them to face the real world.
In academic ways, Computers are an apple of every student’s eye, In this tech savvy world how can education be left from the impact of computers, In collage students carry their laptops to make notes to exchange information, create presentation, develop assignment as well as all the research work. They skilled themselves effortlessly in this regard, which is no mean going to be difficult to work in future.
Professionally, in this era we cannot imagine any work to be done without the help of computers in any sector. Technology is growing fast, to make your mark in this hi tech world you will have to be skilled and professional in computers, Employers train their employees in computers skills and new technologies for the proficiency of their work. To keep in mind that, what importance computers are going to make in every child’s future, allow them use it at the early stage of their lives is the insightful decision any parent can make.
In my conclusion, Computers are the future and this is the tool, which is going to stay here there is no doubt about that, How soon they became masters in this, it will make their future a bright in all the ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92397660819 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6572368411 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529239766082 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6547445253 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.090909091 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160907695706 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703419275411 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575284343575 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909266949086 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774813716414 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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