Demand for food is increasing worldwide What is the cause of this What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough

Essay topics:

Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?

It is needless to debate about the value food holds in every individual's life.There are many discussions and debates are running regarding to the demand and supply of food worldwide however essential measures are not developed yet. This essay will elaborate the root cause of wastage of food and and how this problem can be cured.

While taking the causes and measures of this phenomenon, i am presenting my views at length. The main cause that contributes in the increasing food demand is population growth that is escalating day be day, because of this farmers entail to produce more food through their resources are limited, demand of food is more than supply. Another reason that could be taken into consideration is wastage of food across the globe, for instance, There are so many restaurant where we can see a huge amount of food wasted every day which could be given to the needful, furthermore people do not care about the shortage of food and issues related to this they can face in future.

However, every problem has solution also, likewise agriculture play key role in the production of food in order to help farmers to produce food in required amount day by day,Government should provide all the advanced and essential necessities to farmers apart from fundamental, this will undoubtedly change the scenario of agriculture. Moreover there should be strict law for wasting of food. All the restaurant and places where food is wasted should follow the rule and regulation made by government and forbidding those rules should turned into a huge penalty. Additionally people should get educated about the population growth and shortcoming they can face in future with this problem.

In the end it is quite natural to say that food is crucial part of every humankind's life and we need to take some significant steps to overcome this problem, apart from government everyone should feel accountable for their deeds and it is duty of all to save wastage of food.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, while, apart from, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96987951807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66048950079 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536144578313 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8495740827 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313394194449 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136549828223 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566036588763 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20669565435 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738935322579 0.056905535591 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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