Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded?
Children are future of the nation. How to raise them in a proper way is always a debatable issue. There are fair amount of people who believe that children should not be punished and delicacy is entailed in parenting. While, some set of group oppose this notion. With proper consideration of this crucial issue I would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
To embark on, Children learn from what they see and hear. A little praise on their good behaviour always motivates them to perform the same further. It makes them realise the difference between good or bad. Also, when they get rewarded for something good it makes them feel valued. Additionally, They realise the value of good deeds and it raises their self confidence. For instance, from early stage of their life getting rewarded for good marks in exam or behaving in good ways always encourage them to continue this. Secondly, physical punishment can never be the solution. It only makes them furious and stubborn. When you always punish them in such manner they start adapting it. After certain time of interval it does't affect them at all. Also, it demolishes the fear of getting hurt from them.
Also, there are number of surveys who claim that reward is the most significant tactic in children nourishment. Punishment only spoils them and change their direction. Moreover, it is needless to say that sometimes this approach is necessitated for some particular situation. There are set of children who contain extremely wilful behaviour. In such situation physical punishment is the last solution left for parents to restrain them from doing so. As well as, some aggressive children don't understand with politeness that's why strict punishment is required.
In conclusion I would say that children are tender buds so, proper care is needed in parenting. Every individual has different capability and nature however, reward and punishment should be done according to situation and person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09907120743 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61145464956 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585139318885 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.525831502 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.625 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4583333333 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29166666667 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265633708162 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067783515699 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610953461466 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145482191926 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514926559462 0.056905535591 90% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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