Demand for food is increasing worldwide.
What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough?
It is quite imperative to say that demand of food is surprisingly increasing day by day. Every country across the globe is facing the same situation. However, inspite of knowing the causes we are struggling with this problem. With proper consideration of it's cause and solutions I would like to explicate my views in coming paragraphs.
Firstly, the key reason that contributes to the rising demand of food is population growth. As much as the population of any country will grow the more supply of food will be necessitated. This phenomenon generates burden upon government to provide proper food supply. Additionally, there are multiple places where food is wasted by people, instead of this it can be given to the needful person. Furthermore, generation of food is not enough according to its requirement. Due to lack of proper agricultural arrangement and techniques most of the third world countries are facing this problem. In addition to this demand of food is expanding and supply is not adequate to meet the proper need.
Moreover, every problem come up with some solutions also likewise, there are number of ways we can control this global issue. Government can play significant role in enforcing some strict law against food wastage. For instance, there should be provision of penalty for wasting of food, as well as it should be monitored on daily basis. Furthermore, pollution control programs should be made and authorities should make all the citizen aware of it's repercussion. Addiotionally, Agricultural is the main source of supply of food which need to be paid required attention. A handsome budget should be allocated for farmers betterment. In addition to this, farmers entail new technological support for their farming. Government should look at this matter seriously by allocating all the required facilities to them.
To conclude my essay I will say that it is the moral duty of each and every individual of country to make sure food is not getting wasted. Also, with proper law and awareness this issue can be resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, third, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09792284866 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89873163435 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548961424332 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9225255343 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8095238095 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281619878827 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852456460475 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483423521297 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168081213801 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471224395843 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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