Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era electronic media plays very significant role to promote your product. There are number of companies who put lot of investment to advertise their products. Most of the people believe that advertisements keep us aware of new things and there is nothing harm to advertise your product. While, there is an another set of group who strongly oppose this notion. With proper consideration of both the facts I would like to explicate my views in coming paragraph.
Firstly, I believe that advertisements are only made to brain wash the audience. Some times we end up buying those products which we don't entail much in our lives; because of the way they advertise such products we get attracts and purchase that. Additionally, most of the times companies don't provide the real details of stuff in advertisement they only show the best features; so without knowing the real fact the keen of getting something new we buy such products. Also, popular brands use famous celebrity to promote their products. Since, people admire their favourite celebrities so they invest their hard earned money in those products without thinking. Furthermore, due to catchy advertisements of unhealthy food children get attracted and force their parents to get them which in turn is not good for their health.
Moreover, another set of a group believe that advertisements play important roles in our lives. In our busy schedule we don't get enough time to get aware of new products that are coming to the market. With the help of commercials that telecast on television we get an idea about new stuff that could be helpful in making our lives better. As well as, making a commercial require a lot of efforts; It imparts employment to so many individuals. When we see such commercials and buy product somehow we contribute in their jobs. In addition to this, most of the people agrees that making an advertisement is the excellent way to reach out to each and every house of the country.
In my conclusion, buying anything is all upto the individual's understanding. However, Commercials are important to get informed about new things we should not buy anything which is irrelevant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9698630137 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82724062431 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542465753425 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4440450309 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4736842105 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2105263158 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245777522676 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750208117326 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653748240527 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151929388905 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206283843489 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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