you recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write the letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say what the participants liked about the hotel.
explain why they were unhappy about the food.
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Hello Sir or Madam,
I would like to express my gratitude towards your hotel for organising a whole day meeting for my company last week. I am getting so many feedbacks from the participants about the services. In spite of having a long day busy schedule, we all are ecstatic with the warm welcome and a day long hospitality which is extremely appreciated.
It was a pleasant experience at your hotel however, there are some complains regarding meal that had been served during our stay. Most of our participants showed less interest in the food due to over consumption of oil than entail in general, Additionally quality of beacon and sandwiches were not satisfactory as we all expected and because of this some of us faced some stomach issues. Moreover, we understand that you put all the efforts to make our whole day program up to the mark although these are some ares where you need to work.
I would suggest you to hire some chef with great sense of food quality and its health consequences. As well as please check your food before you serve to your guests that would leave a generous impact on your services.
Sincerelly
XyZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...act on your services. Sincerelly XyZ
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, well, in general, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63798692188 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7295975192 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264513182537 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905328719599 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664560613299 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165370146776 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685190570568 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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