Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern regarding to the lunch you served us yesterday. While first of all, thank you for your meeting service which was considerate and professional.
My company hold a day of meeting in your main hall. Most people attending the our conference found the place we met was the best one among the meeting we held previously. Besides your service, the simple but comfortable trending stlye in the meeting room left a great impression on them.
However, I kindly propose that if the food serving could be improved, your hotel will be more attract more customers. During the lunch yesterday, some of us found the salad was not fresh, the sauce had been put outside for a while which smelt unpleasant. Moreover, I found human hair in the cold dish. I told the waiters to change them, your kitchen responsed in time.
Thank you for reading my suggestion, I hope we can cooperate more in the future if you can improve your food quality, which will be a double win for both of us.
Yours faithfully,
Tony
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 75, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...n your main hall. Most people attending the our conference found the place we met was t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72043010753 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.507290791 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2110136634 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262780975 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894744414796 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614485096353 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158080926406 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369150003383 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.