Where the people to live in depend on the choices by themselves. In that both pros and cons of living places varies greatly among us. As my concern , living in a house does not have more advatanges than that living in an apartment.
To begin with, this issue is a private decision in essence. When talking with privacy, living in a house will protect more personal lives, a family of people can live there alone without too much disturbance. On the other hand, some people would like to have more neighbors. In China, most people live in apartments. Thus there are many residences in one community, even over ten thousand in some places. These populated apartments bring more convinience to the people live here because there are more stores, markets even schools and hospitals around, serving for the community.
Additionally, housing price is another significant factor. Usually, the house price is more expensive than apartments. In China, living in a house is not a consideration for normal people, that's for millionares. As a symbol of wealth, many rich people would buy a house to live. However, people with normal income live in apartments mostly.
Last but not least, location of the house is also valued differently by people. As for the houses, in China, they almost locate in rural area, far away from downtown. Some people like the quiet location becuase there is less air pollution. While this could be a disaster for another group of people working in the downtown without vehicles. In this way, living in an apartment is the best solution for them.
In all, it is not a difficult comparison for people to evaluate the settlements, as we discussed above, the advantages of the living places are the ones what we consider them relatively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where the people to live in depend on the cho...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s varies greatly among us. As my concern , living in a house does not have more ad...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... China, most people live in apartments. Thus there are many residences in one commun...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... not a consideration for normal people, thats for millionares. As a symbol of wealth,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, as for, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91610738255 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62794544221 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563758389262 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1607127816 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528882750695 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15678807499 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109150172988 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29271224353 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122031510603 0.056905535591 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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