Writing task 1 (a letter)
You are going on a short holiday soon and would like to invite a friend to join you. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Explain why you need a holiday.
– Explain why you want your friend to come.
– Where and when do you want to go?
Dear Priya,
Hope you are doing great with your health and spirit. I am writing this letter to invite you for a short trekking holiday at Saputara.
As you know I was busy in my IELTS exam preparation and my office so I didn't get a chance to go for a holiday but now I am done with IELTS exam and very tired with a hectic routine. To have some relaxation, fun and adventure I have decided to enroll my self for Trekking camp organised by one of the NGO in my town for Saputara which involves 2 nights/3 days tour including traveling cost and meals. I know you have keen interest in adventures so I decided to invite you for this holiday. It would be great if you can take a break from your busy schedule and join us. I have enrolled but not booked the date yet but 4 dates are available 11th August, 17th August, 21st August and 29th August so please write back to me which date you prefer so based on that I can book seat for both of us. However, I preferred 21st August because of weekend we both will not have any issue of leave from our current organisation.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards
Divya
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...LTS exam preparation and my office so I didnt get a chance to go for a holiday but no...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oliday but now I am done with IELTS exam and very tired with a hectic routine. To...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26976744186 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26786996555 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8163498015 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242808084813 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120173464682 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102590528196 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222653380988 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919109901168 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.